Note from CR: There's a tycoon and teenager in
all of us. This is a story of ourselves that represents (1) the
"antagonist" (masculine ego in love with power),
and (2) the "protagonist" (feminine
innocence in the full power of love). You'll see what I mean in
this Christmas story.
The Sunset Girl and Ghost of Christmas Future
http://www.sisterraquel.com/2014/12/sunset-girl
By Bernie V. Lopez
eastwindreplyctr@gmail.com
An outfit in Sidney, Australia, wants to expand this copyrighted
screenplay and make it into a movie. Another version is being considered
by a Philippine outfit. Perhaps some of you have read this from a
previous post. It is our fourth and final Christmas story.
imagine a mouse leading a lion
an elephant submitting to an ant
a sage learning from a child
a general using the battle plan of a private
a nerd inspiring a visionary
a goon sanctifying a bishop
a tycoon using the corporate strategy of a teenager
irony of ironies
~ eastwind
--------- article follows:
Terence is a self-made tycoon. From rags to riches. He is called by
newspapers as “The Octopus,” head of a multi-billion conglomerate which
has his tentacles on almost everything from utilities to
telecommunications, computers to cars, shampoo to ice cream. You name
it, he owns it. He is in his late sixties, gray-haired, quick-tempered,
bossy, and vicious. He is called covertly in the office as ‘Hitler”.
Everyone is scared of him.
His office is as big as half a basketball court, with a glass
wall-window having a panoramic view of the sunset on the west side of
Midtown Manhattan. His desk is as large as a pool table, glass and
chrome, with only one folder and six cell phones on top, nothing else.
He starts his day at 7 a.m. As the sun turns red-orange across the
Hudson River, he drops everything and begins to relax. There
is a knock at the door. Just like in the story of Ebenezer Scrooge, it
is the day before Christmas.
TERENCE - Yes. Come in Lisa. I know its you.
LISA - (Nervously). Sir, this is Therese, the new hire you requested.
TERENCE - Hi Therese. Welcome. Sit down.
That will be all, Lisa. Thank you. (Lisa leaves. Therese sits without a
word).
TERENCE - I have a bad name of being
vicious. Deep inside, I am really vicious. It’s my nature. Don’t be
afraid.
THERESE - I am not afraid. That’s a
beautiful sunset.
TERENCE - You seem to be at home right
away. I like that. Nobody is at home in this office when I am around. I
am normally addressed as sir.
THERESE - Would you like a little
exception?
TERENCE - (A bit shocked). Whoow. That’s
good for a starter. And for what reason?
THERESE - It may be a good change of
air for you. I mean, don’t you get tired of people at your feet? It’s
about time you meet an equal.
TERENCE - Whoow. An equal. Wow. I could
fire you right this minute for insolence.
THERESE - (Calmly and with a smile).
Go ahead. I can take it. You want me to go?
TERENCE - Whoow. This is getting better
and better. You are interesting. How old are you?
THERESE - Nineteen. Believe me, it’s
good to talk to an equal for a change.
TERENCE - And what is your position in
this office?
THERESE - I was told I am the
assistant to the third assistant Secretary. It’s my first day. I was
told you hired me because you wanted a “sunset girl” to help you relax
when the day is done. That’s an easy job. I like it. I have a talent in
relaxing people. And I hate office work. That’s the reason I took this
job.
TERENCE - And you call us equals?
THERESE - Yes. The only difference
between us is you’re rich and I am not. That’s to your advantage. But
your are old and I am young. That’s to my advantage. Pretty even,
wouldn't you say? We will both die one day. I might even die before you.
TERENCE - And what is your secret in
relaxing people.
THERESE - (Shrugging her shoulders).
Oh, I don't know. My smile, the way I talk. I'm just me.
TERENCE - (Leafing through her biodata).
Hmmm. Summa cum laude, Boston U. Top of the class. Marine biology.
You’re actually way off the mark, do you know that?
THERESE - Not really. I minored in
Banking and Finance. You could use me. Aside from sunset duty, I am a
genius in finance. Wanna try me?
TERENCE - I have a dozen senior analysts
who can do finance while sleeping.
THERESE - Then let’s stick to the
sunset.
TERENCE - I hired you because, first you’re at the top of your class,
second, your personality test shows you’re an intellectual rebel, and
third, you have no experience. Good mix. I want a young bright kid I can
talk to at the end of the day.
THERESE - About what precisely?
TERENCE - Oh I don’t know, anything corporate, business or even
philosophy. I also need someone who is out-of-the-box, a non-corporate
person, a tabula rasa. You know what tabula rasa means?
THERESE -Terence, may I call you
Terence?
TERENCE - You already did.
THERESE - Terence, don't insult me
please. We just met. You said I was a summa, right? Why ask a stupid
question. Tabula rasa. You want someone who is pure of heart, not
tinted, not biased, no scars, a blank piece of paper, right?
TERENCE - Bulls eye.
THERESE - You want an intellectual
rebel. You’re tired of half of your VPs being intellectually
subservient. You are basically surrounded by yes people, bright ones and
not-so-bright ones.
TERENCE - There are a few brains here and there, but you’re right, most
are a bunch of yes-men. Your first task is to tell me your first
impression of me.
THERESE - I don't think you are
really an ass-hole. You’re just pretending to be. You’re not really
vicious. But for me, you’re pretense is a miserable failure. Maybe
you’re just insecure deep inside, which no one seems to have discerned.
TERENCE - Have you discerned it?
THERESE - I’m not sure. I feel your
soft spot though. You try hard to hide it for fear it would be
discovered. And that would make you feel naked. You did not mind my
insolence. That’s the first soft spot. You are in despair to talk to
someone who is an equal. That’s the second soft spot. You’re lonely as
an emperor. But then again maybe you are afraid of equals. It’s a
complex mix. You are threatened by me when I said we are equals, and yet
you welcome it.
TERENCE - Wait, you’re putting me on the defensive.
THERESE - Then don't be. I think you
sort of wanted a “sunset girl” with no scars for a good reason. You see,
you know I'm not like your other secretaries and assistant secretaries
because I don't care. You have no hold on me. That’s a nice feeling for
me, and for you also, isn't it? You want me to defy you, I mean, for a
change.
TERENCE - Do you feel my despair?
THERESE - Obvious from the minute I
entered the room. So let me be your “sunset girl” for a week. If you
don't like it, fire me. If I don't like it I resign.
Therese stands up, goes to the wall, pushes a button, and a mini-bar
appears. She puts brandy on two goblets and gets two glasses of iced
water, puts them on a tray, and places them on Terence’s table. She
turns to him.
THERESE - May I join you.
TERENCE - Stupid question. You brought
two glasses.
THERESE Ooops. Sorry. Brandy. Iced
water on the side.
TERENCE - Lisa told you?
THERESE - She is a good girl.
Meticulous to your needs. Cheers. For the Christmas season.
Glasses clink. They both approach the window and look at lesser
skyscrapers silhouetted against the now-deep-red horizon. Terence hands
a pair of binoculars to Therese. He gulps his brandy in one shot.
Therese sips hers. They watch a seagull against the sunset.
THERESE - You don't gulp brandy. You
sip it. I think I struck a bad chord in you.
TERENCE Yup, you did. Without showing
you finance and market data, do you think I should buy Daily Globe?
Let’s see what your tabula rasa summa cum laude brain will say.
THERESE - What for? You have
everything. It’s just to satisfy your greed. Oops, I don't mean to be
rude. I mean your ego. Oops, I mean your . your . (Pause). What the
heck. Let’s not call a spade a clover. Let’s not be polite. Let’s lay
our cards on the table. It’s your ego and greed, Terence. I am sorry to
say. I mean, what do you want a newspaper for, to project your image?
Power? Fame? Your image is over-projected already. I mean you were on
the cover of Time Magazine three months ago, and Fortune Magazine four
months before that. You've been on the covers, what, six times in the
last what, four years?
TERENCE - Seven times. (Laughs
uncontrollably). Now I feel good.
THERESE - You feel good being
stripped bare by a teenager from nowhere? Bare naked truth? I feel good
myself.
TERENCE - Yeah, feels good. I was right
getting a sunset girl. So what do I do?
THERESE - Do you have to do anything?
I mean can't you stop? Stop acquiring. Stop merging. Stop this obsession
for your empire. You’re busy but you’re bored. It has excited you all
your life, but not anymore. You are addicted to it, like morphine to a
cancer patient. You need to detoxify. You need to go cold turkey.
TERENCE - If I drop everything, I will
get bored.
THERESE - Not really, if you have
some imagination.
TERENCE - You know we have been talking
for 30 minutes and for the first time, you’re changing me, my life.
THERESE - Sunset girls do that.
TERENCE - This has been bothering me for
a long time.
THERESE - I know. I read so many
articles about you as soon as I got accepted here. I can see through
you. You are naked to me, Terence. You better believe it. All this
velvet under your feet is nothing to you.
TERENCE - I have seen three shrinks in
the last two months.
Terence breaks down without shame, the Octopus, the Hitler sheds tears
for the first time in a long long while. Therese gets the bottle of
brandy and fills the two goblets to the brim.
THERESE - Yup, that’s the first step.
Tears. Very medicinal.
TERENCE - This is not the way to drink brandy, Therese.
THERESE - Sorry. I'm getting carried
away. Okay okay. (She goes to the bar and pours tequila into two small
glasses. They gulp it instantly). Shrinks can't help you, Terence. You
are opaque to these guys because they do not understand what makes you
tick. They go through the motions of knowing you, but they don't. They
just want your money.
TERENCE - And you know what makes me tick.
THERESE - Yeah, I do. I felt it in my
bones the moment I came in. That is why you don't scare me. Now, maybe I
scare you.
TERENCE - So what do I do, Therese. C’mon “sunset girl.”
THERESE - You won't like what I will
tell you.
TERENCE - For heaven’s sake.
THERESE - Okay. Can I put it
straight.
TERENCE - Wait. More tequila.
THERESE - Now you’re talking.
She takes the bottle of tequila and fills the glasses. They are emptied
instantly. She pours again. But just as Terence is about to have a
second gulp, Therese pulls the glass away.
THERESE - Wait wait wait. Here me out
first.
TERENCE - Okay. What?
THERESE - Get rid of your empire.
Give it away. That’s the only way you get out of your rut.
TERENCE - My empire a rut? You’re kidding.
THERESE - Yes, your empire a rut and
you’re drowning in it. (There is silence. Terence yanks the glass from
Therese and both down the tequila). I mean your sixty eight, right?
You’re in the pre-departure area,right. Tell me, have you ever thought
you would die soon?
TERENCE - That’s what I have been telling these shrinks. And they would
argue against it and I would hate them for being hypocrites. They just
wanted to be paid. This has been haunting me for the last four years,
the thought of death.
THERESE - What good is your empire
when you can’t take it with you. Sell half of it. Give it way to
whomever. Do you believe in God?
TERENCE - I do. I do.
THERESE - You should, if you’re in
the pre-departure area. You know there is this Jesuit saint,
Francis Xavier, who said, “What does it profit a man if he gains the
whole world, but suffers the loss of his immortal soul?”
TERENCE - I was thinking of that actually, burning my empire, but I
would not dare. I’m no Nero. And what would I do after?
THERESE - Two key words, Terence;
‘profit’ and ‘immortal’. St. Francis puts it in corporate jargon,
profit. And he compares your puny finite empire to the infinity of your
immortal soul. Compared to empires of history, yours is a grain of sand
in the Sahara.
TERENCE Coming from my “sunset girl,” I have just made a decision. Thank
you, Therese. Maybe I can put up a foundation to rescue the homeless,
give them back their mortgaged houses, how about that? (Therese pours
more tequila. They down it in two seconds.)
THERESE - Anything, as long as it’s
not for you. It has to be for others. That’s the secret. Are you up to
saying a prayer with me? (Without a word, the tycoon falls to his knees
in all humility, facing the sunset.) No, no. Don’t kneel. Slouch in your
chair and swing it to the sunset. Relax. (Terence does so obediently.)
Okay, now, I will pray for both of us. Just sit there and listen. (Long
silence.) Lord, teach us, Terence and me, how to give to others.
Especially Terence, Lord, since he has so much to give. (Long silence.)
TERENCE - Go on, go on.
THERESE - Done. Finished. You don't
have to elaborate. He knows. I have to go. It’s late, and I feel whoozy.
TERENCE - Can I take you home? It’s almost Christmas. Aren’t you going
to be with family?
THERESE - No, no. I live three blocks
away. I live alone.
TERENCE - But you feel whoozy.
THERESE (Pouring more tequila). I
want to walk home after this nice talk with you. I enjoyed it terribly.
For the road? (They empty the glasses.)
TERENCE - I will see you tomorrow at sunset?
THERESE - It’s Christmas eve
tomorrow. Who are you, Ebenezer Scrooge?
They both laugh until they are in tears.
TERENCE - But you have to help me plan to give my empire away.
THERESE - He will help you. He’s good
at that. Just don't forget to ask Him. I am not good at that. Bye. (She
heads for the door.)
THERESE - I don't know. You don't
need me anymore. I gave you your sunset, right?
TERENCE - Wait, wait. Just in case you don't come back, here take this.
Terence has a hard time writing the cheque. He had to tear the cheques
the first two tries. Finally, he hands a crumpled cheque to Therese.
Therese pockets the cheque without looking.
TERENCE - Read the cheque, damn it.
THERESE - (Stops at the door and
reads it). You’re kidding. I can't take this.
TERENCE - You’re doing me a favor. Take the damn cheque. Merry
Christmas.
THERESE - (Sobs and leaves). Merry
Christmas. I won't be back.
TERENCE - Hell, drop in sometime?
THERESE - Maybe. Hey, Scrooge. I’m
your ghost of Christmas future, ain’t I?
TERENCE Yeah, you have inspired me. I will see Tiny Tim tomorrow.
THERESE Great. I'm glad.
The sub-zero wind outside was strong. Therese opens her coat to let the
cold in and deaden her drunk state. With the money, Therese bought a
modest beach house in Long Island and a
second-hand Benz. She bought a second house for her sister to take care
of their sick mother in Cape Cod, where she grew up. Terence was envious and
bought a nearby beach house in Long Island.
Terence drops by Therese’s beach house.
THERESE - Are you following me?
TERENCE - Nope. I'm following Him.
THERESE - Oh. How nice. So we’re both headed
His way.
Of course, their houses were facing west. They would watch the sunset
together often, especially every Christmas eve, the tycoon and the
teenager. Slowly, the corporate empire shrunk, and a new empire loomed
at the horizon, bigger and more awesome than the first. Therese died at
the age of 22, and Terence had to stay behind as there was a lot to give
away. He died at the age of 89. His employees were amazed how Terence
was no longer a Hitler. He became gentle and soft-spoken, never lost his
temper.
The opposite of pride is humility. Humility, like forgiveness,
heals. Pride, like hate, consumes. Therese was a humbling
experience for Terence. All his pride, arrogance, and viciousness melted
at the hands of the teenage genius. Therese was the cool breeze
in Terence’s desert empire, the ghost of Christmas future,
the sunset girl, who came like a lightning bolt and then vanished in the
blink of an eye. It was a repeat of the Christmas Story of Scrooge,
except that Terence was a thousand times richer. ###
|